Shawn Mitchell

There are a lot of things I didn't like about this poem... the flow seemed to changed off and on. But I wanted to work on my alternating line/rhyme scheme ...

The poem itself is very dramatic. The structure affects the atmosphere though. Nonetheless, briliantly written. The second stanza was my favorite.

You're only 15? Wow, very impressive. You have a mature yet very straightforward style. Very nice. I really liked the concept too. These days, it's hard to find an original ...

Whatever's cheaper and trendiest.

Yeah, unfortunately, that's my voice. Well, I sound a little different now... That song is kinda old...

Since we're on the subject of the chatroom, is there any way we could upgrade it to java accessible?

Lol, I'm not much of a biker dude... I just have a leather jacket. And it's more of a casual dress jacket than a biker one. Seeeee, casual dresser -

Good ability for perception. It's kinda a comic without words.

I particularly liked the Pretty Kitty ears. Very nice ink job. Something I can never do. Good stuff.

This is a photograph I took of my lane in the morning. It captures the beauty of something leaving the utter inconveniences of trying to drive up in underneath the ...

Hehe, Kay, you remind me of a student from Hogwarts. :D Of course, you ARE from England, so I guess that's to be expected.... I want to go to England. ...

Something I think a lot of people can relate to in some way or another. Very powerful statements and questions. Good thought provoker. Well done.

I just wanted to introduce myself. If you couldn't figure out my name... then well, obviously you haven't been reading long enough. :P Humm, I don't think there's a lot ...

The shadow of a shadow, leans against my feet. A symphony of darkness, plays its note within my head. The arcane words and the abstract art, create their own canvas; ...

I think what was most effective was how you used your metaphors and personified everything. Your word choice was average, but the way you worded the words was spectacular. Lots ...